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Apersonyouknowisplanningtomovetoyourtownorcity.Whatdoyouthinkthispersonwouldlikeanddislikeaboutlivinginyourtownorcity?Why?Usespecificreasonsanddetailstodevelopyouressay.
Wellasyouknowi’mlivinginChinaHaikou.Myhometownisaseasidecity.Therearemangygergrousbeachesinmycity.Ifmyfriendcometomyhometown,iwillleadhimtovisittheseatrcativebeaches.Hewilllikeit.Andhewilllikegoshoppinginthejiefangwestroad.Thereisthefinalcialcentreofhaikou.Youcanfindlotsofstoresinhere.Youcanenjoyyourselfinhereforexampleyoucanloosenyouselfinthemanydifferentbars,youcanbuysomethingnewinthestores.Afterjiefangwestroad,Ithinkmyfriendwillliketheevergreenpark.Itistheparkthatmanyhaikoupeoplelikevisiting,pleaseimmginethispicture.Therearemanykitesinthesky,kidsplaywitheachotherunderthetree.TheoldplayTaijiinthesquare.Whatapeacefulplace!Ithinkhewilllikeit.
Itisnecessarythatyouwouldfacesometroubleinyouwholelife.Justliketheproverb”Everycionhastwosides.”Itistureoflivinginhaikou.Youmayenjoythevividascenarybuttherestillaresomethingwillbortheryouwhenyouliveinhaikou.
AsyoukonwhainanislandisthesecondlargestislandofChina.Anditisfamousastheionternationaltourusimislandnow.Sothatmeanstrafficjamiscomming.Youmayhavetowaitintrafficjamfor30minormore.Thatwillbosuffer.Butagoodnewiscoming,thegovrmentwillinvestmoremoneyintothetransfortation.Inotherwords,thisproblemwillbesolved.Andanotherworrythingisthepriceofgoods.Youmaybesurprisedwiththegoodspriceinhaikou.Absolutetly,becauseyouareintheinternationaltouriusmialand.Youmayhavetopaymoremoneytolive.Butthepriceofownhouseisacceptable.Youshouldn’tbeanxiousofit.
Tochoosetoliveinacompletenewcitywillbeabigchallenge,ainterestingadvanture.Ithinkmyfriendwillbeacustomedtoliveinthehaikouandibelievethathewillacquainttoliveinthiscity.