字典网 问答 小学 作文 请大大们帮改下托福作文==感激不尽Apersonyouknowisplanningtomovetoyourtownorcity.Whatdoyouthinkthispersonwouldlikeanddislikeaboutlivinginyourtownorcity?Why?Usespecificreasonsanddetailstodevelopyoure
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请大大们帮改下托福作文==感激不尽Apersonyouknowisplanningtomovetoyourtownorcity.Whatdoyouthinkthispersonwouldlikeanddislikeaboutlivinginyourtownorcity?Why?Usespecificreasonsanddetailstodevelopyoure
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请大大们帮改下托福作文==感激不尽

Apersonyouknowisplanningtomovetoyourtownorcity.Whatdoyouthinkthispersonwouldlikeanddislikeaboutlivinginyourtownorcity?Why?Usespecificreasonsanddetailstodevelopyouressay.

Wellasyouknowi’mlivinginChinaHaikou.Myhometownisaseasidecity.Therearemangygergrousbeachesinmycity.Ifmyfriendcometomyhometown,iwillleadhimtovisittheseatrcativebeaches.Hewilllikeit.Andhewilllikegoshoppinginthejiefangwestroad.Thereisthefinalcialcentreofhaikou.Youcanfindlotsofstoresinhere.Youcanenjoyyourselfinhereforexampleyoucanloosenyouselfinthemanydifferentbars,youcanbuysomethingnewinthestores.Afterjiefangwestroad,Ithinkmyfriendwillliketheevergreenpark.Itistheparkthatmanyhaikoupeoplelikevisiting,pleaseimmginethispicture.Therearemanykitesinthesky,kidsplaywitheachotherunderthetree.TheoldplayTaijiinthesquare.Whatapeacefulplace!Ithinkhewilllikeit.

Itisnecessarythatyouwouldfacesometroubleinyouwholelife.Justliketheproverb”Everycionhastwosides.”Itistureoflivinginhaikou.Youmayenjoythevividascenarybuttherestillaresomethingwillbortheryouwhenyouliveinhaikou.

AsyoukonwhainanislandisthesecondlargestislandofChina.Anditisfamousastheionternationaltourusimislandnow.Sothatmeanstrafficjamiscomming.Youmayhavetowaitintrafficjamfor30minormore.Thatwillbosuffer.Butagoodnewiscoming,thegovrmentwillinvestmoremoneyintothetransfortation.Inotherwords,thisproblemwillbesolved.Andanotherworrythingisthepriceofgoods.Youmaybesurprisedwiththegoodspriceinhaikou.Absolutetly,becauseyouareintheinternationaltouriusmialand.Youmayhavetopaymoremoneytolive.Butthepriceofownhouseisacceptable.Youshouldn’tbeanxiousofit.

Tochoosetoliveinacompletenewcitywillbeabigchallenge,ainterestingadvanture.Ithinkmyfriendwillbeacustomedtoliveinthehaikouandibelievethathewillacquainttoliveinthiscity.

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  I’mlivinginHaikouinChina.Itisaseasidecitywithmanygorgeousbeaches.Ifmyfriendcomestomyhometown,Ialwaysinvitehimtotheseattractiveplaces.HewillalsolikeJiefangWestRoad,thefinancialcentreofHaikou,wheretherearelotsofstoresandbars.TheEvergreenParkisanothergoodchoice.Therearemanykitesinthesky,kidsplaywitheachotheronthegrassandtheoldmenandwomenplayTaijiinthesquare.Whatapeacefulplace!   x05Theproverbgoes,“Everycoinhastwosides.”ThereisalsosomethingthatwillbothereveryoneinHaikou.Thetrafficjamisanobviousdisadvantage.Asyoumayhaveknown,HaikouisthesecondlargestislandinChinaandisfamousforinternationaltourism.Myfriendmaysufferthetrafficjam,stuckinthetrafficformorethan30minutes.Fortunately,thegovernmentwillinvestmoremoneyintothetransportation.Inotherwords,thisproblemwillbesolved.Myfriend,also,willbeastonishedbythehighprice.Thecitymaintainsahigherlivingstandardthanmanyothercities.Butthepricesofhousesareacceptable.Heshouldn’tbeanxiousofit.   Tochoosetoliveinacompletenewcitywillbeabigchallenge,aninterestingadventure.IthinkmyfriendwillbeaccustomedtolivinginHaikou.Ibelievethathewillacquainttothiscity.
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